it feels like it's gonna be a new day...
Face wet from fresh dew of the lawn..
Venue of battles I fought from dusk to dawn...
I can now feel the sun rising, its shining..
I feel the connection, my living...
It's a new beginning, a new day..
As I gear up for life ahead, making hay...
Some faces were lost in the night..
their memories follow me through the light...
Maybe it's more than faces,more than memories..
maybe it's a part of my life's song, it's melodies...
So, I sing a new song full of life for me..
A tribute to what they shared with me...
So what if what prevailed was destiny ..
I know my tributes shall last for an eternity..
As i rise towards a new destiny .
Hi Sid...
ReplyDeleteAfter a long time man....
Where were you...? kurnool?
Well i ahve only one world for this poem..Simply beautiful.. Good one..
Your new template is good..i liked it..:)
Cheers
*Sigh*
ReplyDeleteSerene for sure! Reading your work after such a long time!! And I feel that I made the right decision by coming back here...
Peace!
Nice.. Would love to feel that way.. :|
ReplyDeleteHello Sid, long time since I saw something new here...write more often..how are you doing?
ReplyDeleteSounds nice. Sounds hopeful. Heep up the good cheer.
ReplyDeleteThe entire poem is fabulous...each line has its own significance..and I can connect with every line..All the lines are my favorite...
ReplyDeleteGreat!! Keep up the good work!!
This is the first time I have come across something like this..
Anon
beautiful!
ReplyDeletefabulous!
ReplyDeleted last 2 stanza's ...exactly wot i tried sayin thru my last to last post,but u said it here beautifully n effortlessly...:)
enchanted illusionz
beautiful expression touchy words!
ReplyDeleteI guess only one word can sum it all up
ReplyDelete'beautiful' :)