A poem with a lil usage of urdu in it but i have given meanings of the words in bold hoping tht a reader nt well-versed with urdu would also be able to grasp what is being conveyed..
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Hasil thi unki mohabbat, teri rehmat thi Ei-Mushaahit
{rehmat - blessing,Mushaahit - God }
safar kat raha tha madhoshi mein, aisa tha mera musaahib
{musaahib - companion}
Magar dil mein hazaaroon manziloon ko paane ki thi aarzoo
{aarzoo - wish,aspiration}
har manzil ho ek naya mukaam beshumaar, aisi thi justajoo
{mukaam - pinnacle,beshumaar - extravagant,justajoo - Desire }
Kashmakash ke bhavar mein ulfat ki kashti thi,
{Kashmakash - dilemma,bhavar - whirlpool,ulfat - love}
Nakhuda tha main, meri khwahishein bani patvaarein thi...
{Nakhuda - boatsman, patvaarein - oars}
Garoor, ghamand aur vishwas tha ki akeyle ahle-duniya ko karenge hasil,
bhawar mein dagmagate hue dekha humne sirf unki palkoon mein saahil...
{ahle - whole,palkoon - eyes, saahil - shore}
Aaj main nakhuda hoon magar patvar uski muskaan hai,
uski aaghosh mein guzre zindagi, ye khwahish sabse bada mukaam hai...
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BEAUTIFULLLLLLL
ReplyDeletePROFOUND!!!
Take a bow, Sid
This qualifies as one of ur best works till date..really!
simply brilliant!
It takes a lot to understand...but aftr all opne will attain your GYAN for sure if time is invested :P
ReplyDeletegood one
@ swats .
ReplyDeletethanks .. glad u liked it so much ..
@ mahesh
ReplyDeletehe he yeah dude .. i am more comfortable writing poems in hindi/urdu ... but refrain from doing so coz not many in blogville would understand .. but that said .. once in a while i allow myself the luxury
:)
thanks for investing time .. :)
Thanks for giving poetry lovers a master peice
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Nice comparison .... took me 2 reads to comprehend...thing is u stopped writing urdu poetry nd I lost touch...so is this a recent one or something already written?
ReplyDelete@akshaya ..
ReplyDeletethanks dear ..
naah its a recent one .. i refrain from urdu as many here find it difficult to comprehend it
:)
@ anon ..
ReplyDeletethanks for the appreciation ..
No..I must thank you for such wonderful poetry...
ReplyDeleteIm really amazed at the flow of ur words..Its as if they r simply flowing..without any barriers..carrying beautiful meanings wid them...
I get transported to another world..
Anon
*:)*
ReplyDeleteNice!
@ anon
ReplyDelete:) ..
@ gauri
thanks kidooo
:)
bhai maza aa gaya...
ReplyDeleteThat's a nice welcome for someone who had his head on Nature's lap for nearly a week... Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it, mate... Thoroughly!
Peace. Be well.
Not a problem dude..
ReplyDeletewhen a blogger like u writes somethings, its worth reading it....
keep writing.....
@ 007
ReplyDeletethanks bhai ... glad u liked it
@ kartz ..
thanks dear ...
@ Mahesh ..
Well what can I say .. am honoured
But sum how..cudnt get the last line.Checked for the word aaghosh..but cudnt understand..
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@anon
ReplyDeleteaaghosh ...Embrace, Lap, Bosom
to be able to live my whole life with her shall be my acme/pinnacle...
wah wah! kya likkha hei ji
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juss loved it..
@ priya thanks ..
ReplyDeleteglad to see u back after a while .. exams over ??
Is that the meaning? In dict its given as a "calling loudly" ..that's y dint get that part..
ReplyDelete@ annon .. yes refer link
ReplyDeletehttp://www.geocities.com/urdudict/a/aag.htm
plus n number of hindi songs have the wrd aagosh in it ...
@ sid:
ReplyDeletenopes re...xams get over by the 30th..hah!