I saw you cuddled up in the quilt that night,
into the world of dreams you had taken flight.
You seemed to hold the pillow in a tight grip,
countenanced a smile, which lurked on your lips.
Strewn on your face were a few strands of hair,
you seemed to sweat, maybe it was the humid air.
The refulgence of your cheeks; Oh! so bright,
filled the darkness within me with pure light.
I saw your curves, your grace and poise,
as you lay there unaware, spreading joys.
I saw you cuddled up in the quilt that night,
wishing before death do me, that be my last sight
Outstanding...
ReplyDeleteTouched a chord...
thanks tushar ...
ReplyDeleteIts too good man!
ReplyDelete:):)
@ gauri
ReplyDeletehanks dear
Hmmm... Undying love. The damsel dearest lying unawares of her beholders love... Probably a tad insecure. Comforted by clinging on to a pillow...
ReplyDeleteVivid imagery... Very.
Peace.
@Kartz
ReplyDeleteinsecure ???
hmmm .. was not intended by me .. but yeah that cud be an interpretation
thanks
Ah!! So refreshing...after such a long break, I finally read your blog!!
ReplyDeletesweet piece!
:)
Welcome back...and a good start
ReplyDelete@ shruti ..
ReplyDeletewelcome here .. glad you found time between ur exams ... :)
@ ceedy ..
ReplyDeletethanks man ...
That was beautiful!I see the romantic in you has been rekindled ;)
ReplyDeleteYep... That was one way I interpreted those lines, Thot as much that you didn't intend to, but well that's the beauty of any composition.
ReplyDeleteOne can never guess the extent and the depth to which the writer would have reached. We can only guess.
Have a nice day.
Peace.
@ SAMEERA ... HE HE .. I am always romantic .. :P
ReplyDeletethanks .. glad u liked it ...
@ Kartz ...
ReplyDeletepretty much true ...
Romance reborn...now this blogll be fun :D
ReplyDelete@ akshaya ... he he fun ??? hmmm .. i guess i got to get naughtier then .. ;) what say ?
ReplyDeleteExcellent...
ReplyDeletegreat stuff..
wishes..
take care
mip
@ MIP
ReplyDeletehonored :)
NICE :) made me smile
ReplyDeleteSo Sid is bac with a bang!
happy blogging!
@ swats
ReplyDelete:)
as i said nothing dark here ...
its beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteIts so soft..but still has so many layers to it...I might post a new comment each time I read it..
ReplyDeleteThe poem is so soft..still ahs so much depth to it..I could post a new comment every time I read it..
ReplyDeleteur love must be a so lucky to ve such lovely poet for her....:-)
ReplyDeletehe he ... ironical ...
ReplyDeleteironical??!! surprising to hear tat.....
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